Thread:Breezyhzy/@comment-32188346-20200528065243/@comment-4474792-20200528080304

Half the synopsis were quite a mess; too many commas and almost no periods, characters having their names and pronouns wrong, and the sentences structure was a bit off. It's almost like they were translated into English without proofreading, and the original's grammar wasn't very good to begin with. Good job to anyone for the corrections.